Hey Natassha,

Please check the conclusion, it’s seems to copy pasted/transferred from the introduction. Something seems odd here.

Your reader remembers how you conclude before leaving to read something else, so take extra care in getting it right. It’ll come with practice. You generally write good stuff, often backed by experiences, so with some extra care on quality, you can go a long way!

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